Describing a person
----David and first
daughter----
This picture is about
David Beckham and his daughter. He is
picking his lovely daughter and her name Harper. David is a famous football
player good –looking and handsome guy. He is tall man and well-built. Who is
big brown eyes and has a white complexion. He always dresses modestly – Shirt
and long trousers and he always wear bobble hat. He likes to play football and
he has skill to play football. And he loves his family very much. Harper is a cute children. She has white
complexion light blond hair and eyebrow. She has short curly hair and oval face She is 6 years old and a little
girl. She always cheerful and intelligent.
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