￫￫￫￫My favorite place￩￩￩￩
My favorite vacation
It’s located in Kanchanaburi, Thailand –Erawan waterfall. It is a beautiful
waterfall which is a quiet place for relaxing and has seven floors. I can see
saw a view from the first floor until seventh floor. The water is very cool and
fresh. I heard a sound of waterfall, birds, and tourism. I smelt a good air. I saw
the people swim and play waterfall The people can swim, fishing, and go for a
walk around there.
Why you like Kanchanaburi haha!
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I like Kanchanaburi too becaus it very beautiful and I love the nature in this province. Your paragraph is excellency.
I give you 9 poins.
It's a good paragraph, but the detail is very short. You should add more detail. I give you 7 points.
ตอบลบThis paragraph is great and your topic is interesting. But the passage is very short you should add more details. I'll give you 8 point.
ตอบลบi love your writing but you shuold tell more about your place. i give you 9.5/10.
ตอบลบThis paragraph have to add detail . I give you 7 points.
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